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E.V. McCall's avatar

This is breathtaking. Its vivid portrayal of suffering and repentance left me speechless and helped me see this psalm with fresh eyes.

“Each day, I woke to the fire

Of grief, and I blackened and balked.

At night, my bed was a raft rolled

On a darkling sea while overhead

Wheeled numberless stars

That I could neither touch nor change.

There was no way out but through.

I lost everything I thought was mine,

But I did not lose you.”

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Liz Snell's avatar

Love the diction and the flow through this one! Particularly this part:

"At night, my bed was a raft rolled

On a darkling sea while overhead

Wheeled numberless stars

That I could neither touch nor change."

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