A Note from Andy
This project started three years ago with a desire to make each post a combination of three things: a rendition of the psalm, some commentary on the psalm, and a new poem inspired by the psalm. After I had done 30% of the psalms this way, I cut the commentary and poetry bit and focused solely on the rendition. The result was a much faster rate of publishing—I’ve done more psalm renditions this year than I had the previous two years together. I’ve also noticed a surprising result: the psalm renditions got better.
Over the course of this year, the poetry aspects that I cut out started to sneak back into the psalm renditions. These days, I am leaning into the creative freedom inherent in the fact that I’m not translating the psalms; I am making renditions, and those are two different things.
But this does pose a challenge as the style of the psalm renditions has changed over time. So, in the coming months, you will see some “re-release” posts as I revisit and re-do early renditions.
Starting with Psalm 19.
Rendition of Psalm 19
The heavens declare the glory of God. Every night, the sidelong hip of the Milky Way Shows itself to you. You see Backward across miles and years Along the light of the works of the Almighty. The earth at your feet is fruitful, wild, and weary. It pours out words day and night. The sky and the screaming birds And all the fullness therein say: Holy, holy, holy. The circuit of the sun spans the sky. If you would have light and heat, Why are you not more in the sunshine? If you would see the glory of God, Why are you always elsewhere? If you would hear the word in the wind, Feel the warmth on your face and wait. Lord, your word wends your people perfectly; I wander a lifelong in it. Wrap it around my heart to heal. Speak the long law down directly And make me wise. Curve the straight line of your commandments Over me and make me glad again. Put the honeycomb of your way In my mind’s mouth. Even now my chest, my ribs, these rafters, This cathedral, fills with the word that made it, And your name hushes through the clerestory. It was always easier to give my life away Than it was to lay it down. I see my every fault in holy light; My hidden thoughts are pearl bright. But your love is longer than I thought, and stays Like fire by night and smoke by day. The stars sway in your holy heaven. The sun walks its lightlong stretch of sky. I watch and wait and listen.
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Andy, again, wow! I wish I could understand how to attempt such a beautiful understanding! Do you have a way you see or study to be able to make these ideas live so fresh again? If so, please share! "Wrap it around my heart to heal" stopped me dead! And put the honeycomb of your way in my minds mouth was such a gorgeous dripping picture of sweet stickiness and joy! I long to be a le to see the word, especially familiar parts, with these new holy eyes. Please forgive me for commenting in gushes every time. I just love them! Oh the hip of the Milky Way.. I'll never see her again the same way!!!