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There is so much power in this project! Thank you for sharing all of this with us; I'm speechless and will no doubt have to read this several times through to get all the wealth from it. Blessings!

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I am so glad you are enjoying it. Cheers!

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Striking juxtaposition of the power (and potential danger) of God's voice and the one who worships Him wrapping themselves in His holiness. I really enjoyed the poem, especially the eucharistic imagery in the second stanza and the garden metaphors. Thank you for sharing!

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Liz. Thanks! About wrapping oneself in his holiness - it is a bit of a stretch, but one informed by the Hebrew. The word the ESV translates as "splendor" is hadarah, which means adornment and is used to refer to priestly garments. So I suppose it means "holy attire" more than wrapping oneself in God's holiness, but I like this translation as well. (That is why I call them "renditions" most of the time rather than "translations, in order to give myself the ability for creative license like that.)

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