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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

This is lovely!

"Even when I wander at the violet hour;

When wolf fears steal in to take

A share and howl in the hills;"

violet hour and wolf fears are so good.

"the shadow falling

Between the way I wanted

And the way I went"

A fascinating way to read the shadow.

"The cup of my lifted hands

Is fuller than I could hope to hold.

None of it is what I wanted,"

isn't that the truth!

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Julie's avatar

None of it is what I wanted, /But you shepherd me still"...

This is a [unable to find an appropriate adjective] contrast to your earlier version of Psalm 23. It is bold, truthful, human. (note- none of these are appropriate substitutes for the missing word in brackets) I appreciate it. Very much. Beautiful.

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Ryan Sparks's avatar

Well done! This is the shepherd that I know.

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Bonnie's avatar

Thanks for showing that it’s always Jesus we need

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Anna Dufek's avatar

Thank you! I needed this!

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