I want to say stupid things even though people will say, "there are no stupid things." (there are) But I still hold you write better songs of praise than even David. And I mean it. And it's true.
The word “pocked” is great here. And I love the Jesus allusion in “I have a different food they know nothing about.” Also reminds me of the ravens feeding Elijah.
I want to say stupid things even though people will say, "there are no stupid things." (there are) But I still hold you write better songs of praise than even David. And I mean it. And it's true.
The word “pocked” is great here. And I love the Jesus allusion in “I have a different food they know nothing about.” Also reminds me of the ravens feeding Elijah.
I love the simplicity and quietness of
"Before I suffered, I was proud
And wandered from the way.
But now I am lowly and quiet
And I wait for your word."
Also, your rendition of Heth reminds me of Moses, and your rendition of Teth reminds me of Psalm 34
I have two things to say. If these come across as critiques, that is not my intention.
#1: "199" instead of "119"
#2: Why have these taken longer to come out vs. some of you other similar-length renditions without poems?