Rendition of Psalm 14Every fool knows God is gone, So they give themselves to things They can’t come back from; Feed themselves on limelight; Live by the hope of moving on. Like everyone who has sold themselves, They insist it was worth it. The Lord looks down to see If anyone has yet let Goodness creep up on them, Yet felt the subtle knives of grie…
Also ended up Googling the lyrics to "Hotel California" by the Eagles. Love the song and the poem you made
This is your best in the range of 1-14. I love the imagery all through, and I see some repeat lines:
"January in England, where the snowdrops writhe underfoot" -psalm 1 poem
"Time...tumbles pips up" -Nebuchadnezzar in Psalm 2 poem